tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9050647819747745202.post241113471760505231..comments2023-09-10T10:02:26.081-04:00Comments on MMS: Campus Progress T-Shirt EntryPaulhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12720984667277993716noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9050647819747745202.post-80862356217650563872007-05-31T01:24:00.000-04:002007-05-31T01:24:00.000-04:00I think you could do at least three more in the Em...I think you could do at least three more in the Empowered Monuments series.<BR/><BR/>Finish 'em off before they even ask.Davidhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04287021188756918707noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9050647819747745202.post-79577963081569153892007-05-30T12:33:00.000-04:002007-05-30T12:33:00.000-04:00All astute points. The arm is fucked up, again......All astute points. The arm is fucked up, again...you always have a knack for pointing out my anatomical errors! I blame the upward glancing perspective. <BR/><BR/>I meant the text to be more integrated into the style of the graphic, and instead it seems to "pop" off of it. If I were to re-do it, I would of blasted the text out of the bottom, with opposing diagonal swaths of black/white to those of the skirt. <BR/><BR/>Really though, I was a little too conscious of my previous design while doing this. Thematically, there's really no difference, and with the high contrast, it was hard to stylistically venture in a new direction. The text became a necessary diversion, when I was in the midst of conceiving it. The guy I sent it to seemed to really like it, but I'm not sure I like the small voice in me that feels typecast. I'm running out of monuments!Paulhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05840393910157322233noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9050647819747745202.post-13989727846127255662007-05-30T06:32:00.000-04:002007-05-30T06:32:00.000-04:00Also, those skirty patterns of black at the bottom...Also, those skirty patterns of black at the bottom are distracting me from the text.Davidhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04287021188756918707noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9050647819747745202.post-77300908685517425342007-05-30T06:31:00.000-04:002007-05-30T06:31:00.000-04:00Paul,You have a knack for smart and inspirational ...Paul,<BR/><BR/>You have a knack for smart and inspirational designs like this, eh?<BR/>I think that the text doesn't look as "empowering" as the "REPRESENT" text did. The text needs to follow that upsweeping motion!<BR/>Lady Liberty's arm looks short (rather than foreshortened) due to a misdirected cross-contour line near the elbow.<BR/><BR/>Nice design, again.Davidhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04287021188756918707noreply@blogger.com